Enid is a bartender at John’s local. She is twenty three and is saving up to go volunteering in India. John saw her in the supermarket once collecting for her trip;
“Spare a few pound to help save orphans in India John?”
John replied “Hello Enid, I don’t give to charity. Pass me the collection box and I’ll take over though – I want a way of being ignored by everyone”
Enid raises her eyebrows and backs away.
Grammatical errors 